The 42nd love

Why does she sound like that

Like a song amidst the gunshots

Like a rhyme amidst the clatter

Heavenly voice to the losts

Things that matter

Like when a raindrop falls on there ground

Like a wind chime taking on the storm

Like a water hustling down the Brook

Like a sigh when it’s said and done

Like life and it’s rhythm

She sounds like I’ve been deaf

All my life

And hers is the only voice 

I ever heard!!!!

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61 comments

  1. twinklingwords · February 13

    Love, love, love❤😄 spellbinding😁

    Liked by 1 person

    • Shaggy · February 13

      That was one true feeling actually!!I mean I really felt for her!!!

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      • twinklingwords · February 13

        I know!! Hence I used the first three words yo! Beautiful❤

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      • Shaggy · February 13

        Haha thank you sooooo much!!!! Means a lot…..
        May be I should go and show her this poem.
        What do you say???

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      • twinklingwords · February 13

        To be honest, that was really, really beautiful and by all means I think you should (kinda the kind of perks I was talking about dating a writer!)🙌🙌 I think she’d go “aww for me?!” in her heart!

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      • Shaggy · February 13

        I just hope it happens, I’ll give up swearing!!!
        I’ll have to ask her name first!!! Btw!!!

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      • twinklingwords · February 13

        Woah! I thought you guys were already friends. I think then you can show this after you guys become friends, don’t want to come around as too strong yo! Regardless, all the best!!

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      • Shaggy · February 13

        I just saw her today, in the college library and wrote this poem right then and there all the while ogling her!!!!

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      • twinklingwords · February 13

        Woah creepy, creepy! Reminds me of Bollywood movies😂😂 “mera dil bhi kitna pagal hai” types!

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      • Shaggy · February 13

        Hahaha she didn’t know I was staring her….. Wasn’t that creepy I assure you…… Kind of nervous stare…… If anything such exists…..
        Oh my!!!! Not that sunjay dutt Stare…… I’ll get arrested

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      • twinklingwords · February 13

        Oh, oh! Yes of course that nervous kind of stare is sweet. Well I hope you guys get your happily ever after and I write about it🙌🙌
        And that Sanjay Dutt line had me hahahaha! Rofl😂😂

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      • Shaggy · February 13

        The guy who is falling in love 42nd time ain’t gonna live happily ever after with anyone hahaha!!!! Well it should be embarrassing!!!!
        😀
        What am I doing at stock market I should be a comedian

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      • twinklingwords · February 13

        Oh yes 42nd😂😂 you know, you can always dream! Yes, you should be a comedian too😁😁

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      • Shaggy · February 13

        I always dream!!!
        I am actually, I just don’t perform!!

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      • twinklingwords · February 13

        Oh great, may be you can try someday 😀

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  2. Deepika · February 13

    It took my breath away!!!!! Amazing!!!!!!!!!

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    • Shaggy · February 13

      Oh my!!! Thank you Deepika!!!
      Means A LOT!!!!
      I am just smiling ear to ear right now!!

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      • Deepika · February 13

        I won’t even say now to not say that word to me….. You are smiling made me smile too!!!!

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      • Shaggy · February 13

        Oh shit!!! I just forgot yaar!!! No more T word!!
        😀
        How you doing!??? Is it raining in your country??

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      • Deepika · February 13

        Oh shit!!! Yes you did!!! 😝😂😂 Eat almonds!!!!
        Which country do you live in????

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      • Shaggy · February 13

        I will henceforth?!!
        I live in Burkina Faso??? 😀

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      • Deepika · February 13

        Really?? Do you speak French too??

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      • Shaggy · February 13

        I speak Espanol a bit ofc, a bit of Bengali…… Too wbu???

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      • Deepika · February 13

        My mother tongue!!!

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      • Shaggy · February 13

        Bengali!! Your mother tongue

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      • Deepika · February 13

        Naaa… it’s Hindi!!!

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      • Shaggy · February 13

        Ooh!!! You didn’t tell if it’s raining???😠😠

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      • Deepika · February 13

        Nah it’s not raining here! 😀

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      • Deepika · February 13

        Burkina Faso with a question mark!!! Are you not sure??😝😂😂

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      • Shaggy · February 13

        Oh well, I failed it punctuation, so you can expect funny things from me!!!

        Liked by 1 person

      • Deepika · February 13

        Haha…. Glad you gave me a heads up!!! 😄

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  3. Anisha · February 13

    Such a cute poem! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  4. my valiant soul · February 13

    Smiling after readin this.Good one!

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Rohit · February 14

    Loved this 👌

    Liked by 2 people

  6. Akhila · February 14

    42Nd time.. Wish you good luck for making it a centuary

    Liked by 1 person

  7. pins & ashes · February 14

    Mush pot!

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    • Time Traveller · February 14

      Love is in the air after all, the germs got in……

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      • pins & ashes · February 14

        Haha! The germs … Right! Wonder whether the other mush pot has written something loverly 😂

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      • Time Traveller · February 14

        Nah she hasn’t!!! Doesnt even know my name!!!

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  8. misstalkaholic · February 15

    Why is it 42nd?

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  9. Moushmi Radhanpara · February 15

    Such a sweet poem.

    Liked by 1 person

    • Shaggy · February 15

      You have always been sooooo encouraging!!!!
      A big big thank you for that!!!!
      And a pizza ofc🍕🍕🍕

      Liked by 1 person

  10. Kiran Goswami · February 28

    Aww.. Shaggy can be sweet too 😍😍💓Lovely it was Ishan. 💗💗

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    • Shaggy · March 1

      Aaye thank you so very much!!!!
      Some times when Shaggy falls in love, he can be sweet yea!!!! 😀

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  11. crazygenesblog · March 8

    So subtle yet so loud !

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    • Shaggy · March 8

      So many praises……..
      You will spoil me, 😀
      But seriously……
      Thank you….. ❤

      Liked by 1 person

      • crazygenesblog · March 8

        It’s nice how you use so little words and make a statement , I would have written a 200 word essay and it won’t be as good.

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      • Shaggy · March 8

        Haaye!!!
        🍩🍩🍩 Donuts for you……
        For being so sweet….

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  12. crazygenesblog · March 8

    Atleast our belans are still in the kitchen today . Thanks for donuts 🙂

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