आज फिर हमने एक ख़्वाब देखा है

इतनी तकलीफ पे भी दिल बाज़ न आया

आज फिर हमने एक ख्वाब देखा है

हर मोड़ पर मिल ही जाता है रंज हमे

कुछ यूँ भी हमने इतेफ़ाक देखा है

पर कुछ तो है जो एक आस है दिल में

और हर आस को होते ख़ाक देखा है

अंजाम पे पहुंच कर हुए इश्क़ में नाकाम

कुदरत का ये भी  हमने मज़ाक देखा है

पहले भी बिखरी हैं दिल की तम्मानायें टूट कर

पर आज ज़िन्दगी को ज़रा उदास देखा है

इतनी तकलीफ पर भी दिल न समझा 

आज फिर हमने एक ख्वाब देखा है। 

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103 comments

  1. crazygenesblog · March 19

    Koi baat nhi dekhte rho khwaab , ek din zaroor poore honge . Nice one .

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Deepika · March 19

    Oye what happened to you man??

    Liked by 1 person

    • Shaggy · March 20

      hi Deeps
      Nothing yaar, exams I guess…. a few dreams that’s worrying me for now…..
      nothing wrong as such!!

      Liked by 1 person

      • Deepika · March 20

        Hey shaggy boy!!! Exams…uff…won’t even enter that Lane…. And about dreams, what are your dreams, only if you want to tell…
        P.S. Don’t scare us like this.. Please.

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      • Shaggy · March 20

        Exams emasculates!!!!
        Mai udna chahta hun, daudna chahta, girna bhi chahta hun bas
        rukna nai chahta……. 😀 😀
        Okay dreams wasnt the right word, academics ambitions may be, I wanna get in DU…. I wonder what if I couldn’t get in….. And that worries me….. .

        Haha I won’t …. 🙂
        Since you won’t take the T word, here’s a 🍪 cookie for you…….

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      • Deepika · March 20

        Lol!! Sangat ka asar ise kehte hain 😁😁
        Are you having your 12th exams?? DU mein bhi admission ho jayega… Just remember, Jai mata di, let’s rock!!!!

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      • Shaggy · March 20

        Bilkul…… 😀
        Nii, I am giving my bachelor’s exam, I plan to do my master’s from DU
        Jai mata di ……

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      • Deepika · March 20

        Okay… All the best for your exams!!! You’ll definitely get admission in DU!!!! 😊😊

        Like

  3. uneasycalm · March 20

    Exam time main itne khwaab dekhna acchi baat nahi!! 😛 …. And itna dard!!! Hua kya?? But great composition…Loved it!..straight from the heart!!

    PS: you may want to correct the typo in line 6 🙂

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    • Shaggy · March 20

      hahaha!!! are exam na ho koi jung ho gai…… khtm hi nai ho rhe!!!!
      kisi sham bas dil udas ho jata hai akele chaand ko dekh kar…….
      oohh!! thanks for mentioning……… correcting it right away…….

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      • uneasycalm · March 26

        hehe….i know the feeling! 🙂 date raho!! 😛
        Itni udaas line! uff…..but it makes a great opening line of a poem! I couldnt resist completing it!!!! 😛

        “kisi sham bas dil udas ho jata hai akele chaand ko dekh kar,
        Goya waisa hi tanha hoon, baahon main itne taare sametkar!

        Ghira rehta hoon aise logon se, jo faasle pe hain rooth kar,
        Na aate pass, na door jaate, bas dekhte rehte hain ghoorkar”

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      • Shaggy · March 27

        Actually there’s a series of exams lots if entrance exam and every other shit………
        Aaye!!! That’s so beautiful…..
        When you didn’t respond for 2-3 days I thought, itni achhi line bekar ho gyi…….
        But then you came up with something even more beautiful……..

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      • uneasycalm · March 27

        That’s a long but fruitful journey then….best of luck!!
        Yeah i got occupied with other things so couldn’t respond soon!! And it does need some time to come up with a reply which even remotely matches upto your standards! : D ..itni acchi line bekaar kaise jaane de sakte they!! Glad you liked it!! 🙂

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      • Shaggy · March 27

        Not so fruitful journey right now???
        Aray it’s okay?!! Take your time……

        OmG!!!! You always praise me too much, gonna spoil me…….. 😀
        😄😄😅
        Abhi to bahot kuch seekhna hai……

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      • uneasycalm · March 27

        Not too much…. You deserve it!! Seekhna to sabko hai bahot kuch 🙂

        Liked by 1 person

  4. Deepika · March 21

    Hey! Shaggy boy!!! I’ve nominated you for the blog-aholic award. I hope you’d accept the nomination. Have a fantastic day!! And all the best for your exams!! 😊

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    • Shaggy · March 21

      Woah!!! Very grateful to you for that…….
      I’d definitely do the award, but do you mind if i take a bit time……. Quite tight on schedule right now!!!!
      You too Deeps, have an awesome awesome day…….

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      • Deepika · March 21

        No problem buddy!!! Just focus on your exams right now…. DU mein jo admission lena hai… 😊😃
        Thanks!! 😃

        Like

  5. Sanskriti Sharma · March 21

    Wow, Shaggy.
    इस दिल को कौन समझाए जनाब,
    टूट कर भी न जाना ये प्यार का दर्द
    ये तो आज भी आस लगाए बैठे है
    की लौट के आएगा वो खुदगर्ज़ ।

    Pehli baar likha kch hindi mei, haha, don’t kill me for this plz😂

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    • Shaggy · March 21

      That was very impressive sharma ji….
      Arre no killing no damning……
      At least your first is so much better than my first
      You after a long time……???

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  6. Moushmi Radhanpara · March 22

    Har aas ko hote khaak humne bhi dekha hain,
    Par khaak ko keemti banana hamne hi sikha hai..
    Kabhi kuch dekha aur samja hai humne bhi,
    takbhi keh rahe hain, karenge aap sabhi pure,
    isilye aapne ye khwaab dekha hain.
    (Too bad?)
    Anyways I’ve never seen someone scaring over a D.U entrance so much. I cannot say much, just work hard and if it’s meant for you it will happen, and if not better doors are always going to open.
    So just stay calm and focus. 🙂

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    • Shaggy · March 23

      Awww man!! You are the sweetest!!!!!no not at all bad!! It was LOVELY and inspiring………
      May be I am fretting too much because, lot is at stake. Either, get in DU or stay here and run the business…… And listen people talking about market, stock prices. Scares me a bit….
      But then you’re right, fretting won’t help, working will.
      Hey, Moushmi, stay around please. You’re a big big big motivation ❤

      Liked by 1 person

      • Moushmi Radhanpara · March 24

        That was too much of praise for me.
        I will sure stay around. Don’t worry. And just relax and keep working. Whatever is going to happen will happen for good. 🙂

        Liked by 1 person

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