कुछ और है सितम तो आज़मा ले ऐ ज़िन्दगी
अब भी थोड़ी जान बाकी है
कर सके तो करले कैद बंदिशो में क्योंकि
अब भी उड़ने को थोड़ा आसमान बाकी है
थोड़ी अँधेरे में बिता दी थोड़ी जंजीरो में गुज़र गयी
दिल में फिर भी थोड़े अरमान बाकी हैं
तेरी जफ़ाओं से टूट गए ऐ ज़िन्दगी
पर देख अब भी एक मुस्कान बाकी है
हज़ार कोशिशें तेरी हमें मिटानें की
फिर भी दीवाने का नाम बाकी है
कुछ और है सितम तो आज़मा ले
अब भी थोड़ी जान बाकी है।।।
Superb Ishaan and so true there is still little life remaining. Brilliant
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Thank you mam…
Yes exactly!! There’s still life left…… In every broke, in every failed person there’s still a bit of it…..
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Yes absolutely Ishaan and why should there not be
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I am speechless. The words pierced me.
Such a marvelous post.
“Jee le khul kar, mere dost; kyuki zindagi abhi baaki hain.” (
(I am sorry I know it isn’t that great but still couldn’t help but write it. 🙂 )
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Moushmi………….. Thank you…………
You are soooo soooo sweet………..
That’s why I write…… To get such lovely response………….
And that enhancement you made is lovely lovely……
A big thank you for that as well……..
And let me tell you once more…..
You are very sweet…….
😀
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I am too flattered, thank you dear.
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😄😄😄
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This is so beautiful, Ishaan😄 just amazing!
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Thank you soo much……
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😁
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Not sleeping???
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Insomniac, Shaggy😁 but I’m trying to change that, so will sleep soon. There was a time jab din raat neend aati thi, miss it!😂
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Ow!!!! Okay!! So you sleep less or what….. I mean never had insomnia, just curious……
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No, you can’t fall asleep easily so you get less hours of sleep than the world😭😭 it takes time but gets better for many gradually with a night time routine.
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Ooow that’s bad…….
Do you have any clue how many people have lived in this world
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Lol, I have no idea! You tell me😵😂
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Some 17 billion??!!!
Yet we managed to be alive at the same time??
Coincidence??
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That applies to literally everyone alive in this time!
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That was a philosophical pick up line gone horribly horribly wrong( see I wrote horribly two times)
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Haha!
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Such an inspipring poem.. bhut khoob
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Thank you……
Just an attempt to tell people its not over yet…..
You still have something left……
Glad you liked:)
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you wrote it?? Superb!!!
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Yes!! I wrote it….
Thank you…..
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Wow….you are good!!
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haha. bas koshish ta hun abhi toh……
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