अब भी थोड़ी जान बाकी है

कुछ और है सितम तो आज़मा ले ऐ ज़िन्दगी

अब भी थोड़ी जान बाकी है

कर सके तो करले कैद बंदिशो में क्योंकि

अब भी उड़ने को थोड़ा आसमान बाकी है

थोड़ी अँधेरे में बिता दी थोड़ी जंजीरो में गुज़र गयी

दिल में फिर भी थोड़े अरमान बाकी हैं

तेरी जफ़ाओं से टूट गए ऐ ज़िन्दगी 

पर देख अब भी एक मुस्कान बाकी है

हज़ार कोशिशें तेरी हमें मिटानें की

फिर भी दीवाने का नाम बाकी है

कुछ और है सितम तो आज़मा ले

अब भी थोड़ी जान बाकी है।।।

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26 comments

  1. boundlessblessingsblog · March 6, 2017

    Superb Ishaan and so true there is still little life remaining. Brilliant

    Liked by 1 person

    • Shaggy · March 6, 2017

      Thank you mam…
      Yes exactly!! There’s still life left…… In every broke, in every failed person there’s still a bit of it…..

      Liked by 1 person

  2. Moushmi Radhanpara · March 7, 2017

    I am speechless. The words pierced me.
    Such a marvelous post.
    “Jee le khul kar, mere dost; kyuki zindagi abhi baaki hain.” (
    (I am sorry I know it isn’t that great but still couldn’t help but write it. 🙂 )

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    • Shaggy · March 7, 2017

      Moushmi………….. Thank you…………
      You are soooo soooo sweet………..
      That’s why I write…… To get such lovely response………….
      And that enhancement you made is lovely lovely……
      A big thank you for that as well……..
      And let me tell you once more…..
      You are very sweet…….
      😀

      Liked by 1 person

  3. twinklingwords · March 7, 2017

    This is so beautiful, Ishaan😄 just amazing!

    Liked by 1 person

    • Shaggy · March 7, 2017

      Thank you soo much……

      Liked by 1 person

      • twinklingwords · March 7, 2017

        😁

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      • Shaggy · March 7, 2017

        Not sleeping???

        Liked by 1 person

      • twinklingwords · March 7, 2017

        Insomniac, Shaggy😁 but I’m trying to change that, so will sleep soon. There was a time jab din raat neend aati thi, miss it!😂

        Liked by 1 person

      • Shaggy · March 7, 2017

        Ow!!!! Okay!! So you sleep less or what….. I mean never had insomnia, just curious……

        Liked by 1 person

      • twinklingwords · March 7, 2017

        No, you can’t fall asleep easily so you get less hours of sleep than the world😭😭 it takes time but gets better for many gradually with a night time routine.

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      • Shaggy · March 7, 2017

        Ooow that’s bad…….
        Do you have any clue how many people have lived in this world

        Liked by 1 person

      • twinklingwords · March 8, 2017

        Lol, I have no idea! You tell me😵😂

        Liked by 1 person

      • Shaggy · March 8, 2017

        Some 17 billion??!!!
        Yet we managed to be alive at the same time??
        Coincidence??

        Liked by 1 person

      • twinklingwords · March 11, 2017

        That applies to literally everyone alive in this time!

        Liked by 1 person

      • Shaggy · March 11, 2017

        That was a philosophical pick up line gone horribly horribly wrong( see I wrote horribly two times)

        Liked by 1 person

      • twinklingwords · March 11, 2017

        Haha!

        Liked by 1 person

  4. navvirk · March 7, 2017

    Such an inspipring poem.. bhut khoob

    Liked by 1 person

    • Shaggy · March 7, 2017

      Thank you……
      Just an attempt to tell people its not over yet…..
      You still have something left……
      Glad you liked:)

      Like

  5. uneasycalm · March 11, 2017

    you wrote it?? Superb!!!

    Liked by 1 person

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