12 o’clock

She left me for a dude

Who wakes up before noon

toaster has burned down

And milkman has gone 

Mails have piled up

And it’s the last day for dues.

Something’s wrong with alarm

It’s not of any use.

When I wake up at 12

To realise everything has happened

 But Not the way it had to happen

My dreams have packed the bags

While I am brushing my teeth

It’s going somewhere in a cab

While I am taking a bath

 I reach the party to know it’s over

Everyone’s drunk and I am sober

And turn away

It’s the meaning I delve

When I wake up at 12

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59 comments

  1. Pradita Kapahi · February 7, 2017

    Nice Shaggy!

    Liked by 1 person

    • Shaggy · February 7, 2017

      Hello Praditaaaa!!!! Thank u!! How are you doing? Hope u didn’t get up at 12

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      • Pradita Kapahi · February 7, 2017

        Lol! No I didn’t! And thank you I’m good. Hopefully so are you and this poem was just a thought, not the reality 😉

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      • Shaggy · February 7, 2017

        Ooho!! yea I am fine too…..
        Haha imagination yea….I usually get up by 730…. And still my mom has got no chill…. 😂😂
        I

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      • Pradita Kapahi · February 7, 2017

        Enjoy it while it lasts. There comes a time in everyones life when sleep becomes a rarity. It’s called either work or parenthood 😉

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      • Shaggy · February 7, 2017

        Hahaha yea I am sure!!
        Stages of life!!! Growing up was adventurous when I was kid

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      • Pradita Kapahi · February 7, 2017

        Yes. But hold it there. Don’t think about the future too hard. Enjoy your here and now

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      • Shaggy · February 7, 2017

        Word!!
        That is the secret to happiness

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  2. Shreya · February 7, 2017

    Hahaha omg and I was advised to check this blog for revolutionary stuffs……

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    • Shaggy · February 7, 2017

      Shut up bitch. This is revolutionary stuff….. I ain’t making money like you……

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      • Shreya · February 7, 2017

        Aww. I perfectly know why.

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      • Shaggy · February 7, 2017

        A bitch then and a bitch now

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  3. Shreya · February 7, 2017

    Coming today??

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    • Shaggy · February 7, 2017

      No… Have got “work”

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      • Shreya · February 7, 2017

        She is coming

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      • Shaggy · February 7, 2017

        Still no!!

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  4. twinklingwords · February 7, 2017

    Vivid imagination you have, nice😀

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    • Shaggy · February 7, 2017

      Thank you!! More of a reality I’d say…. Like she is still gonna leave me.
      At what time do you wake up

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      • twinklingwords · February 7, 2017

        Aww but I think people don’t leave writers that easily, can’t get that depth everywhere, no?!
        Anyway, around 8 am!

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      • Shaggy · February 7, 2017

        Apparently they do if writer is ugly.
        Haha wish people actually liked the depth…. It’s the shallowness that’s getting the likes……
        You get to sleep more than me….. Life’s not fair

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      • twinklingwords · February 7, 2017

        Everyone is after beauty and money, I hear you!!
        And I’m certain I don’t because I’m an insomniac!😫

        Liked by 1 person

      • twinklingwords · February 7, 2017

        Not everyone! most people*😂😂

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      • Shaggy · February 7, 2017

        Yea ofc!!!

        Liked by 1 person

      • Shaggy · February 7, 2017

        I am sapiosexual.
        Oh my! That’s such an alien concept to me!!

        Liked by 1 person

      • twinklingwords · February 7, 2017

        Haha wah! Let’s hope for the best then😀

        Liked by 1 person

  5. laurelwolfelives · February 7, 2017

    This was a good one! I enjoyed it! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    • Shaggy · February 7, 2017

      Haha thank you Laurel!!!
      Long time??
      How have you been?

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      • laurelwolfelives · February 7, 2017

        Lord have mercy….trials and tribulations. LOL
        But, as usual, I’m struggling through them. 🙂
        You okay?

        Liked by 1 person

      • Shaggy · February 7, 2017

        Uh oh!!! Lots of peace to you
        Yea
        I am doing good!!!

        Liked by 1 person

  6. Akhila · February 7, 2017

    ⏰⏰⏰ take all.. Better luck next time

    Liked by 1 person

    • Shaggy · February 7, 2017

      Thank you!!! 3 would be enough!! Sweet of you!!!

      Liked by 1 person

      • Akhila · February 7, 2017

        Good night… let me know if it worked..😛

        Liked by 1 person

      • Shaggy · February 7, 2017

        Good night!! I sure will 🙂

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  7. Deepika · February 7, 2017

    What’s up buddy??

    Liked by 1 person

    • Shaggy · February 7, 2017

      Hi!! Not much!!!
      U say??

      Liked by 1 person

      • Deepika · February 7, 2017

        As usual! I’m the amazing me, having a great time!!!!

        Liked by 1 person

      • Shaggy · February 7, 2017

        Not writing much these days!??

        Liked by 1 person

      • Deepika · February 7, 2017

        I did! Something different from what I usually write or do…You can check it out…

        Liked by 1 person

      • Shaggy · February 7, 2017

        Really?? How did I miss it! Damn!!
        Let’s sue WordPress…..
        Checking it right away

        Liked by 1 person

      • Deepika · February 7, 2017

        Sure for both!!! 😀 😀

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  8. Letters That Matter · February 8, 2017

    Nice Content.

    Visit my blog also for experiencing the magic of letters.

    Hope You will like it. 🙂

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    • Shaggy · February 8, 2017

      Hey!! 🙂
      I sure will!!
      Your blog seems really interesting…
      Btw thanks for stopping by and thinking my blog is worth the follow!!!! 🙂
      Cheers

      Like

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  10. Shahz · February 8, 2017

    Hi!!!
    Congratulations Señore 😀I’ve nominated you for the Bloggers Recognition Award pls check link for details surescribbles.wordpress.com/2017/02/08/blogger-recognition-award/

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    • Shaggy · February 8, 2017

      Hey Señorita!!! I just saw it and commented on it!!!
      Thank you so much for thinking I deserve it!!!
      And many congratulations to you 😀

      Liked by 1 person

      • Shahz · February 8, 2017

        Thank you my dear fella😍

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  11. Kiran Goswami · February 8, 2017

    Hello Mr. Revolutionary.. 😂😂
    This tagline is AMAZING 😻😻
    Well, I can aim of sleeping till noon if there aren’t works.. It sounds like heaven, man!! 😹😹

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    • Shaggy · February 9, 2017

      Oh well!!! Ab I am blushing!!!!
      Thank you!!!
      Haha same here…..
      Aha such wishes!!
      Heaven. Yea, heaven it is!!!

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  13. shivashishspeaks · February 12, 2017

    Outstanding

    Liked by 1 person

  14. akansha1602 · February 13, 2017

    This is really nice!

    Liked by 1 person

    • Shaggy · February 13, 2017

      you’re just too kind
      thank yu

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  15. kalyansparks · March 13

    Thanks for writing this..it’s really lively to imagine .soo nice and captured the genuine feelings

    Liked by 1 person

    • Shaggy · March 14

      Thank you so much, I am glad you liked it……
      Your appreciation means a lot…..
      😀

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  16. awesomediary1 · October 13

    hey! ur writing is picturesque 😇…. perfect! nd if u spare time plz do have a look at my new budding blog

    Liked by 1 person

    • Shaggy · January 10

      Thank you so much. And sorry for late response

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    • Shaggy · January 10

      I sure will check your blog!!!

      Like

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