The Suburban Girl

She’s in the blue cabin you’ve been wanting

And in that pumpkin patch

She is dancing in the meteor shower

While you hiding in your car’s hatch

Into the Challenger Deep and out with a pearl

Oh look at her, she is a suburban girl!!

There’s a panic button she doesn’t know about

She rides and moans and laughs at you

And that’s the funny feeling you get once you’re done

But she keeps herself off the blues

It appears a tornado when they swirl

Oh look at her, she is a Suburban girl.

Love is a pill, she has thrown in a gutter

Fastened the seat belts and ambitions on front

She’s got a clevage, you’ve got a problem

Mess with her she’ll be blunt

She’s got a fire and a cute curl

Oh look at her, she is a suburban girl.

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20 comments

  1. Vinayak Gupta · February 4

    Very well Described… ❀

    Liked by 2 people

  2. Pradita Kapahi · February 4

    I suppose this is for your girl. A fiery girl she is and very lucky too to have a guy who admires and loves her so much. May the love last forever 😊

    Liked by 2 people

    • Shaggy · February 4

      The poem is inspired by my girl, yea it’s for every girl out there though…..
      Oh my….. So sweet of you Pradita……
      She read your comment and told me to say special thanks to you for your wish…….
      So a big big THANK YOU!!! May it rain chocolates for you!!!!

      Liked by 1 person

      • Pradita Kapahi · February 4

        Awwwwww. You two are very sweet. Made for each other.

        Liked by 1 person

      • Shaggy · February 5

        Haha she loves me, I love her but we aren’t in a relationship right now….. More like Robin and Barney!!! We watch himym together!! πŸ˜„

        Liked by 1 person

      • Pradita Kapahi · February 5

        Oh! That’s unfortunate. So much love and yet no future? I bet there’s a good reason behind it. All the best to you two πŸ™‚

        Liked by 1 person

      • Shaggy · February 5

        Well, yea thanks for wishes, it’s more like best friend wala pyaar!!!

        Liked by 1 person

      • Pradita Kapahi · February 5

        Oh. I see. Well friends can be beloveds too. 😊

        Liked by 1 person

      • Shaggy · February 6

        Exactly!!

        Liked by 1 person

  3. Daal · February 5

    lots of fire, drama, & passion – love it πŸ™‚

    Liked by 2 people

  4. Simply-Me · February 6

    This truly shows your love for her.

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Kiran Goswami · February 6

    She’s got a fire and a cute curl.. 😻😻😻

    Liked by 1 person

  6. akansha1602 · February 13

    Great descriptions!
    Liked reading it.
    Keep going!

    Liked by 1 person

    • Shaggy · February 13

      thank you very much!!
      Glad you enjoyed…..
      most certainly!!!
      πŸ˜€

      Liked by 1 person

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